December
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100 WC #12
Michael really wanted to go to the zoo. But he also wanted to become a zoo member. After becoming a zoo member , he was assigned to take care of the horses. After , he has been promoted to manager of a group of early starters like he was. He was rewarded a medal for his dedication to the zoo and his kindness. Within 7 years , he became manager of the zoo. He has seen workers come and go but one stood most impressive. That is Kenny Adams. He was just like Michael and soon after he made Kenny manager of the zoo.
Pretty impressive, I like the part where you put horses in the zoo!
This is late four days 🙁 . Demerit! anyways good story.
Try not to start a sentence with but , otherwise your story was really good
Nice story Jorge!